A New Soul

I've been a bit distracted the last couple months, but I'm hoping that I can get back to this fetish of mine. This one's from a favorite genre of mine. A lovely young woman gets a new soul. I've tinkered with the text a number of times, and I'm thinking it's close to what I want. I hope you like it.

Edit: Tinkered with things quite a bit. If she's becoming a demon, she should look like one. Am I right?

Edit2: More changes. Blurred the portal some to create a sense of depth. Image was too flat and the pretty girl was getting lost in the clutter. Also made some changes to the text. Way too much 'telling' instead of 'showing' before.

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